The Story
I haven't put much art here in the past months. To be honest, I haven't drawn that much, and between work and life...well, there's only been those small creative bursts. I should put something up here. Maybe if I did, I'd get feedback on pieces. I'd also have a gallery (that I feel) might be worth looking at. 'Cause I have gotten better. I can see the progression when I look back at the pieces in my gallery now. I think it's time to clean that out by the way. Keep what is good. Put in some new pieces. Start again;anew.

p.s. Is that semicolon being used correctly?

I NEED YOUR HELP WITH:
I'm going to upload reference pictures that are going to be used in a comic that is slowly taking shape between my friends and me. If you read this, or see the pictures, feel free to comment on that pictures design. Is it clear? Does the design make sense for the world/setting it's in? Is it too cluttered/too much detail or information to sort through? etc, etc. And no crap like 'wow! that's really good!' or 'I really like that!'/'omg that so aweszome!' (definitely stick to at least somewhat proper grammar)

I hate that. It's bad critiqueing. It doesn't help me improve my art skills, or the design at all. Believe me,I know it's good. If I bothered to put something up here (in public for cripes sake) it means that I think it's good, and I feel I've made a decent piece. No offense, but that's not what I need people's opinions on, and frankly I don't care if you think it's good or not. I care if said piece accomplishes what I intend it to accomplish.

(Sorry, didn't mean for that to turn into a rant, but it's a BIG pet peeve of mine.)

SO,anything with 'Late Nite' in the title: critique that piece's design. I will put in the description what it is intended to provide a reference for, and you tell me if it's a good reference or not.

If you could do that, that would be great.

Thanks in advance, and looking forward to your input!
-Tim